hot ness man.. your flow is dope... feeling the flow.. your voice is good. feels good over the beat.. but as a remix it doesnt cut the mustard.. i mean.. if just to say you were to actual do this for commercial purposes with JLo .. this you wouldnt have come off appealling enough.. i know if it was serious and not boredom you would of layed it out easy...

suggest for coolness.. next time you do this.. actually try and make it commercially appealing ..

second verse was better.. that u did..

this is still safe...

one.. peep my track http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62772