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Old 07-02-03, 04:00 PM   #2
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Is using question marks in the place of apostrophes the new cool way to type?

Anyways, I didn't really like the first one. Wasn't feeling it much. It looked really forced with the rhyming and some of the stuff you said in it.

The second one I thought was good, though. I felt it more than the first one. It had more heart in it. More emotion to it. I could relate more to it since I went through something like that a little while back.

"I love you, n I cherish the times it was me and you alone"

That was my favorite line.
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