Shiznit's Thoughts:

Its funny how love just spins you around and do all those crazy stuff huh? like you would do everything for love...i always thought that love doesnt exist...its just like a mere reflection of what we just WANT...but for some reason someone made me feel that its way way better than that...but thats not the point..i mean all im sayin is love is really powerful...

*ahem* alright bout the piece...

VOCABULARY

>well written ....interesting use of words....i mean the littlest word that you put in this meant sooo much that it melts my heart...good job!

FLOW

>it fits perfectly ...i liked reading it...i actually read it a couple of times and it quite good to read...

CONTENT

>wow!...i feel the love...im really in that state right now...love themes are usually the good thoughts on how to make a piece like this...nice

these lines reminded me of someone special..'my life' and when i read this...i was like...damn!

"i'm never gonna stop loving her i'll do what i can
now that i've found her i am a complete man"

^^endless, forever, infinity...nice!


"i'd marry her now so she is here to stay
and i love her more and more each day"

^^^now thats The Ending....i loved it

OVER ALL

>amazing!....very nice...deep ish! drop more!

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- Tampons are still expensive -
- That's a Fact - </center>