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Old 07-02-03, 06:10 PM   #4
BabyGurl68
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i liked the second one alot betta then the first one, the second had more feelin rather than in the first one where it it kinda was made to rhyme n a couple of things threw me off in the beginning, overall nice work keep it up
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