Shiznit's Thoughts:
hmmm...based on what ive read from you so far *ahem* 'anti-matter'...hehe

...i really liked this one...
i had to do this cuz its fun breaking down and shit...*shakes head*..cuz im the only one who doin it so here it goes
VOCABULARY
>good choice of words...BRILLIANT!....some of the words correlate one another and thats a cool ish...
i.e.
"engeniusly i go threw mytoses, produce cell division, and grow another self
hottness times 2 so i know i'll never get left on the shelf"
^^^^see those words im talking about?? madd nice!
FLOW
>very very smooth its like its way perfect to fit the piece...readin out loud makes it even better....i liked it
WORDPLAY
>"occward,...cuz theres muthafuckas lookin like us underground
10% body water ,and speak with anti-matter-waves of sound
a reverse effect in the human brains cerebral cortex
makeing it impossible to transmit after the waves create a vortex"
^^^^enough said...that was hott!
CONTENT
>very creative...it showed really how talented the writer is..hehe
OVERALL
>anti matter rocks! LOL
i wanna see more drops aight?