ok, playa all those ^^replies are all new-bs let me give you some veteran input....it would make a nice audio, but not a text...

text usually need a topic lines like this:

Yo, I'm gonna keep this shi' for real//
I don' give a fuck, how ya'll niggas feel//

dont fly with vets

not the best, it would be nice in audio but ya need to up everything especially vocab

score: 4.5/10

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