Yo, u should check out some shit by a guy named Gangsta One. He's the shit. Here's 2 links with his shit in it:

"Real Life": Open Mic -Gangsta One http://www.rapbattles.com/forum.sho...=threadid=62696

"Go Gangsta on the Bitch": Open Mic- Gangsta One feat. MC-CM R-Ryder http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=threadid=62724

lyrical_tatcix VS. Gangsta One: Battle http://www.rapbattles.ocm/forum/sho...=threadid=62681

He loves feedback so give it to him