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Old 07-03-03, 06:40 AM   #5
RythmicTendicies
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The Third Verse Was A Little Short, no? Only 12 Bars!

Any, The RHyming Here Was A Little Basic, BUt You Have Idea's, You Got Potential!

This Could Have Been Better With Muti's, But It Wasn't Too Bad, I Can't Wait To See You Elevate Dawg, We Should Hook Up Some Time, PM me Or Somthing!

Keep Spittin'
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