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Old 07-03-03, 08:54 AM   #7
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Give Him Some Critical Feedback, Something That Might Help Him Improve!

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The First Verse, Flowed Nice, Had Good Multi's, Started The Joint Off Nicely...

The Next Three Stanza's Were 2 Of The Best, They Had Capital Vocab And Wordplay, Had Relevant Meaning. Really Took The Piece To A New Level!

Frommy mic potency to like MITSUBISHI-. This Verse Had The Best Wordplay, It Was Brutal Dawg, Vocab As Well Was Luminous!

Overall: I'll Give This a 8/10, You Could Have Made The Concept More Clear, But Still, It Was A Dope Piece!
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