Sorry, I Wasn't Feeling This The Least Bit .

Basic Rhyme Scheme, Stretched Lines, Poorly Structured Bars, No Flow.

No Lines Stuck Out To Me as Powerful, Or Of Any Good Composed.

This Was Just Basic, & If You Do This In Audio, You Will Have The Worst Flow In The Songs Forum .

I Give This A 4.

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