aight first of all....that wsnt a very good topic i dont think...thers not much you can wist into that...and killa..although you ma homie...your shit was dead basic...and A2Z used some wordple and metaphors that worked well...but i liked this verse particulalry

Ember glares burn into my spine as I weep to myself mentally//
I think about my baby and my girl about how much they meant to me//
Creeping down shady looking streets and side alley ways//
Im watching my back making sure to avoid the gang banger gaze

so ma votes going to A2Z