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Old 07-03-03, 04:16 PM   #8
D-Dizzle
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This was aiight, it flowed good but at the same time your lines seemed wordy and jumbled up and it kinda gives of the feel of just babbling. Creativeness was o.k. with a couple slick lines but this was average
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