Well I hate to repeat everyone but they were both really good. Its a hard decision.. you both have great talent but I dont want to boost your ego... so here's what we could improve on ... we can all extend on our vocab but not in these..... umm.. yea, metaphors better imagery... I like to feel like I'm in the story picture it like a movie being told.... I couldn't feel the movie setting in understaments too well... it was more just a story... I felt more of like I was there in Bribe's so my vote goes to Bribe

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