View Single Post
Old 07-03-03, 05:12 PM   #11
Emcee Rashaddy
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
IP:

Oh shit that was a wack ass battle. Agony took it. His verse sucked though mad elementary I'm a go down the line for both of you.

Agony what a name man, Your gonna be under pain when i spit mah raps they'll rot ya brain man//

ok. . . Um.. Man was used to much. it was dry.

You sinkin faster then the Titanic man, you betta jump away you see the trigga on my gun click//

This was wack. The word man was unessacary, man. lol

TOO LATE your dead before you even got to rhyme, man your in the wrong frame of mind, you should just cough up this win cause its already mine//

If I were agony I would speak of your obsession of men. Since he didn't that decreases on his part. I suppose that line is ok,

like an aligator I'll jump up and bite ya fuckin nose off, holy shit man did your brain just go and walk off?//

maybe that alligator line is good in another country but in Brooklyn Alligators aren't known for that and taht line brain walking off is wack.

Tryin to fight a shadow was a big mistake, your gonna be like them salem witches and get burned at the stake, for pete's sake man your in the wrong place man//

I guess its ok, for a bar but its not a punch. and Man was uneccasary.

I'm burnin your insides like acid, your getin your ass kicked by a shadow bitch, your rhymes are gonna be so bad it'll be like a computer glitch//

Burning his insides is nice, THis Bar is nice, That should be how your entire verse is.

You need to walk outta here before an admin beats you down for bein so bad at rappin, aww kid don't frown//

na... thats not to great. Not great at all

lots of cats can be good in this game of rap, but my reccomendation is that you quit ASAP//

thats good except that I pronouce ASAP, A.S.A.P. but since I got the concept and so did alot of people its ok