A quite superb piece.

Imagery was brilliant. Constructed in a kind of half ' purpose built', half 'as you go along' way....which added to the effect of this piece.

The flow was quite effortless, the rhyme scene not getting in the way of that (some stick to rigidly to it, therefore suffocating the piece with too much emphasis on it..)..but as said, you didn't do this.

The ending was superb. Though i was thinking of something else when reading this. Something more to do with humanity destroying nature, and the towns n cities taking over...and i guess it could be intepreted like that..i mean hey, that's poetry, right?..

...well enogh said from me.

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