A Liverpudlian, eh? Well let me tell you, even if i did have a car, you wouldn't dare nick it. I'd spray it with turd liquid of sorts. Alreet?!

Only kidding.

Onto the piece. The first part (up until 'remember our times') it was very pure in emotions. You just let rip your feelings and emotions onto paper (deja-vu?! Yes, cos many people do this..and it's good they do..).

Really though, it seemed very honest and to the point.

Then i felt the next part where you did the question-answer thing was good. Maybe over did it a bit. But nonetheless, from the heart.

The ending (last two lines) kind of blunted the piece. But then, that could also have been what you were feeling like. You know, had enough, end it all. Though could've done it in a better way, because this piece was one of those straight form the heart, i wouldn't put too much emphasis on it...

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