Concept reminds me of something LL would write. I like the concept, but I think that the way you put some words together didn't flow well when I read it in my head. (i.e:
Reminicing on our huggin our playin around/
Times when we wud sit an love wut we found/

I read that back again and again in my head and I thought that it would sound much better if you just added 'was' in between 'love' and 'wut.' So, I'd end up like this...

Reminicing on our huggin our playin around/
Times when we wud sit an love 'was' wut we found/

I like the concept. Clean it up a little and you're on to something... Peace...