Even out your syllables to create a more fluid flow.

Get rid of the " all over the place, makes the verse look more like a fashion statement than a battle. If it is true wordplay, people will understand it without the quotation marks, trust me, we're not that stupid.

Use more creative punches, personals, wordplay, etc. Most of your shit was played out.. Do research on your opponent if you have to, but use personals, they help.