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Old 07-04-03, 04:17 AM   #6
LaRyan Shabaz
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I'm going with 13th on this one.
His story seemed to make a stronger impression, with more emotional involvement. Fgee's verse was good, but I felt it had too many lulls in the action. Fgee's was easier to read, however. And sometimes 13th came... I guess one could say immature, but the story was, I shudder to say it, but "deep". Thank you.

Off to read some 10-bar craptacular battles now. lol.