Tight Drop Dawg!

THis Had Real Emotion In It, a Genuine Desire To Get The Message Out!

You Had Dope Vocab, And Rhymes, ie..
"Here in a moment, then gone in an instant/
Ever so close, yet always off in the distance/

It Was A Good Length, Not Too Long! You Had Alot Of Brutal Bars, Heres A Few Of My Favourite:

Should I follow my dreams, or do I take the path of least resistance/
The pursuit of a love I've never known in my existance/
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I can't divide myself from my fate. I can't divide myself from you/
I need to find a way to escape, but I can't seem to break through/
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Just for once, I wish that I could show you how I feel/
Holding nothing back, and leaving everything revealed/

Overall: This Had A Great Concept To It, Can't Really See Much To IMprove it 8.5/10!