how can you upp for votes when you were tha only one to post a verse,
well imma juss break your verse down then when he spits ill break his down, imma explain it verry well becuz i cannot poll vote, can you hit up one of my battles on the front page.


aright, the lyrical assassin came to roc this mic::i'm pushin' the big wheels and you still sportin' the trike/
we both are new to this rapbattles forum::but here you are actin' like you top dog, when you really of the "bitch decorum"/
~iight flow~~nice punch~~flow not Consistant~
you better be careful on my war battleground::cause "a soldier" should really watch every detail that surrounds/
cause my rhymes are somewhat like mines::either you encounter them when you step, while some others are timed/
~good punch~~nice flow~~but unconsistant flow~
to explode on you, leaving nothing but torn pieces::my lines are lyrically inclined nothing but devine vocab releases/
until this "ASoldier" ceases to exist:: i'll torture him like i'm the dragon and he's been kissed/
~nice wordplay~~straight flow~ ~not consistant~
this soldier's been captured, to the troops he's M.I.A:: he's under my containment, never to see the light of day/
it's either you go out that way, or i'll straight, Kill you In Action:: realize that when you first saw SOUL, it was a fatal attraction/
~bad flow~~light punch~
you thought and decided to fuck with the wrong man:: your soul's been sought out, and i hold it in the palm of my hand/
i'm leaving you gripping, but you'll soon lose your RapBattle pride, and it's this rap alone that will lead to it's subside/
~good finisher~~IIght flow~ ~not Consistant flow~
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iight you need to work on flow consistancy, make more then 1 line at a time flow,
overall good verse.