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two poems that i've written, feeling you and cant be with u
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07-04-03, 01:23 PM
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Both were quite simplistic. Maybe stuck too rigidly to the rhyme scene. But hey, as i said, simplistic.
But yeah, to the point. Emotions seemed strong. And it was straight.
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