Shiznit's Thoughts:

VOCABULARY

>very well organized and written words...there were some words that were creatively used and placed perfectly within the lines


FLOW

> it wasnt that bad but its just when i read it....i got lost at some parts but i got it then go from there...its pretty interesting how u structured some words to fit in the flow exactly every line


WORDPLAY

> good multis ...there aint really nothing much on it but u made it at some point that u played the words and mix them well..props


CONTENT

>very typical but on how the way u made the reader interested to read on ur piece by using some really deep thoughts on some lines....it was really nice


OVERALL

>not that all bad but i read far more good than this from ur previous drops...but i liked it

drop more!

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