Shiznit's Thoughts:

VOCABULARY

>damn man...i think u used like half of the dictionary on there...very deep, sensational, huge-meaning, fantastic, and definitely remarkable words. NO one can really execute those kind of words other than YOU..very well done...


FLOW

>well of course...i read it like 5 times...it sure did fits PERFECTLY...its like reading some masterpiece unendingly...its like when u read it out loud...it was like skipping one flow from another...brilliant

WORDPLAY

>wow...the nonrhyming lines stood out really great...scheme of the words were good...very well thought out..props

CONTENT

>*speechless* its like every line has it own different meaning ...every liine its like a roadtrip...u went from one place to another...thoughts then incredible views to more different aspects of mere far more interesting facts and relatable (dont know if thats a word) beliefs and feelings

BEST PART

"Glance in the mirror reflects darkening soul
Twisted sickness running through taut veins
Cyclonic climax staged in belly’s of beasts
Hollow struggles vomit into baneful abyss"

^^^definitely the climax of the whole piece...was nice...i love the originality of this piece...i liked it

OVERALL

>SUPERB!

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