Shiznit's Thoughts:

VOCABULARY

>very nice choice of words there....very well thought out...interesting use of indistinctive phrases...good!


FLOW

>hmmm...i had to catch my breath for a while there....i got lost at some points cuz maybe prolly i aint really used to rapping it out loud or prolly i have read it quite differently...but it was alright tho...

WORDPLAY

>wasnt that bad at all....little multis slid some in between somewhere...the dashed phrases...were tight...props!


CONTENT

>very very out there....emotional ...i can feel the pain...but ive read like a lot about this and its very typical..but sure quite nice to read tho...

OVERALL

>not bad not bad....maybe coudve executed some parts far more better...but i liked it

drop more man!

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