Shiznit's THoughts:

Cant be bad at all...but the fact that it was structured quite weird...it was well stood out at some points

...can work at the rhyme scheme at the line breaks i mean some were off but for some reason u could like understand that you put those in for a purpose...

It was quite an alright piece...not much in it but it sure does fun to read this

i wanna read more...so yeah!

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