Shiznit's Thoughts:

hmm...very nice...the beginning really started the artistic approach on the piece but as soon as it gets to end it messed up the parts that made it a bit confusing but still got for me to comprehend some views on it despite its imperfection

You used very nice vocabs and inspired words...i liked it

and yeah you could work on the ending but yeah that was just a suggestion but hey either way..its good

drop more gurl!

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