Shiznit's Thoughts:

FIRST ONE:

kinda not feelin it all the way although it had some good messages and content..but on how the way u structured and arranged the piece...it got weak..some words didnt fit or even reacts at the others...but its interesting...u tried..and it good to try


SECOND ONE:

i actually liked this one better than the first one..for some reason u made this one a bit more organized and the rhyme scheme was better and quite interesting on the content of this...props


OVER ALL

both great pieces.

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