Shiznit's Thoughts:


*sigh* of course the very popular "IF's" of life..it really amazing how we assume things and just predict whats gonna happen if we are this or that ...or we did this or some shit...the questions and the answers...still is a mystery to me


oh and yeah bout the piece...

>lots of emotions and im really feeling this....the fact that you used to IF thing repetition...the piece stood put really astoundingly even without them..but like u structured that to look artistically good...the "ifs" helped out a lot

>not too much "interesting" vocabs in it but cuz u used simple words was quite amazing...

i liked this...hope u drop more!

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