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Old 07-04-03, 04:39 PM   #4
shiznit
Tampons are expensive
 
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VERY creative indeed.

Vocabs are well used on this one...rhyme scheme was unsteady and quite complex use of words...

the very meaning of the piece really made this whole thing stood out a lot

very nice...drop more!
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