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Old 07-05-03, 01:38 AM   #4
BabyGurl68
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cryin cuz u special to me but i aint specil to u
cant live witout somethings esepcially you..

^ i liked the way those lines floweed, it was a lil rough on the outside, btu the emotion was felt, its one of those things u just get off ur chest, im sure if u went back n reviesed it could be sumthin real nice, it was pretty good thou respect
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