vote-Mad Man
Sureal, I liked your piece a lot, in fact it was dope, but I'm really getting sick of the "son kills father" stories. It was really well written, but it's just getting too played out.
I liked Mad's verse more because it was full of fond memories and strange adjectives. For example, "that brilliant night". I've never heard a night described as brilliant. A really nice line was:

"Paying no attention to the fact that I should be in haste
Wondering how I am supposed to fit my whole life, into a suitcase"

good battle, even if was just for fun.
Peace

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