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VARENTAO...i really do appreciate the feedback especially coming from one of the most respected poets from rb...the lengthiness was meant to be written...im just a very lengthy writer...just write some random stuff and put them together....hehe..but yeah im really glad u liked it...
13th Disciple...WOW!..i never see you in here before man...what made you peep on my shit??
lol @ feepost....
one thing...
"Jen.....and i'm glad to see your poems are better than your jokes.."
^^^whats that supposed to mean? *glares*...when did u hear my jokes?...damn...i know i know ur my fan and all but...*shuts up*...nahhhhh..im messin with you...but i really feel special that u read my shitty poem...THanks a lot man!