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The Concept Did Suck, You Were Trying To Be Eminem Especially With This Line - "whats it matter that im white behind a mic i dont even exist"! Sounded Like His Role Model Song Or Whatever It's Called...

But You Had Decent Flow And Your Vocab Is Steadily Improving, Your Made Good Use Of Multi's Like - "sure you teaze laugh an hate, im glad though you help me take away my mistakes an recreate" - Even Though I Thought That line Was Pretty Weak!

Keep Improving, And Think Your Subject Throught Before You Spit, But Keep Them Coming - Overall: Needs Work!, 6/10