Heh. Don't just look at the structure. But how the words are placed.

Dunt matter, everyone has their opinions.

I'll explain a bit.

First meaning - two people who have been given a certain amount of time to live. One goes all wild, and goes all over the place. The other just freezes, lies blank right untill it's too late "motion"....boom is not exactly to do with a bomb. But more so depicting that their death has come, suddenly. You know, it's exploded...then death.

And then of course, you could see it like there's a bomb there.


The other one is life. One of them wastes his life away afraid, cold hermit like..right till the end, but then it's too late, as death comes for him. While the other is the opposite, active, lively, goes through the motions, yet dies the same. At the same time...

er...hope that helped.

Got to remember one thing. Poetry is more so simplicity that it is, complexity. For the simplicity put in a complex is usually ther most powerful and adhering thing...

..all comments appreciated (i mean ALL..inclusing illusionist..)...