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Old 07-06-03, 02:09 PM   #22
Red Scare
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Originally posted by fgee
D'side won this easy
horrible ryhme structure though....u need to sort that out
was hard to keep track of your verses flow and was confusing
other cat is still a front liner....need some work with punches etc
nothing outstanding but D had better punches and word play


nuffin said.....keep elevating
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