Oneliner: This was Tight, Peep My Shit Back!

Lol, Just J/k...

You Had a Killa Concept, Don't Think Anyone Has Done A Piece On Hiroshima Before, Although Don't Put All The Rhyming Words LIKE THIS, You Know!

The Flow Was Aight, But Was A Little Choppy In Some PLaces, You tried To Put Multis in: Up in the sky I can see THE BLACK RAIN FALLING
It’s burning my eyes I can hear the OTHER SIDE CALLING, Which Helped The Flow Alot!

Expand Your Vocab, It Was A Little Too Basic, Some People Say That EXpanded Vocab Is Confusing, But To Me It Shows That You Spent Time On The piece, NOt Just Using 3 Letter Words, You KNow?

Overall:7/10, Could Have Improved It A Bit, But It Was Still A Aight Piece!