"..all comments appreciated (i mean ALL..inclusing illusionist..)..."
^admirable since most peeps wood be like yo fuck you

i liked this as u said simplicity is poetry, in poetry theres no matter whether it is put into a complex frame and package the ideas are often the simplest jus gone into in depth. this piece was nice i enjoyed it, the simplicity made it an easy read but provided some nice imagry, im sure you have better since u seem well educated on poetry and ill be interested to see more from you....
much luv
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