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Old 07-06-03, 07:34 PM   #4
Symilee
a perfect imperfection...
 
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man, why would you call me out? this should be a quick one.....


You think you got nice lines, but check it they dont even rhyme on time :: this shits a lyrical warning sign, make you stop speakin like u were a fucking mime // 1
I dont even have to try, delight in this bitch's fright, you could be a flood light and couldn't spit "bright" :: merk you on sight, rip ur eyes out and paste em to my rhymes so you can see how to write right // 2
Callin me out like u got somethin to spit about, cant get saved from this lyrical rout :: got this battle bout done, got this bitch so nervous hes spittin "doubt" // 3
Lyrically spittin dismissal missles at JWC without loss, stop his "played" lines like i was pressin "pause" :: expose his flaws, send his fag ass to go back Jerkin Without Cause (jwc) // 4
503 couldnt stop me if he spat real flow, got this bitch movin in slow-mo :: challengin people he cant beat, bitch cant "mold" good rhymes if they were Play-Dough // 5


definitely not my best stuff, but should be good enough......vote on best verse. peace.
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