You Had a Killa Concept, Don't Think Anyone Has Done A Piece On Hiroshima Before, Although Don't Put All The Rhyming Words LIKE THIS, You Know!

The Flow Was Aight, But Was A Little Choppy In Some PLaces, You tried To Put Multis in: Up in the sky I can see THE BLACK RAIN FALLING
It’s burning my eyes I can hear the OTHER SIDE CALLING, Which Helped The Flow Alot!

Expand Your Vocab, It Was A Little Too Basic, Some People Say That EXpanded Vocab Is Confusing, But To Me It Shows That You Spent Time On The piece, NOt Just Using 3 Letter Words, You KNow?
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this pretty much explained everything, nothing else much needed to say.
The topic was one of the most unusual...even though alot more unusual ones came by. The vocab does need work but other than that, this was a good piece.
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