Well i been lookin at other rappers work and tellin em how 2 improve but i reeely related to this as i went thru same thing recently so i cant tell u 2 improve it cos its PERFEC lol

oh actually 1 thing stop sayn fuckin love you lol you scarin the gurl but props this IS hot
(and this IS NOT a d.r feedback)

... but i would still like u 2 return the favour

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