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Originally posted by ShEpNeY_zAnY
yo aiight check it uh uh....

yo bitch i think u just put any bullshit sentence together so u could make my name/
but still u cant beat me so go and find a new game/
ur rhyme was so gay if i was u i'd kill myself wid shame/
*Weak, trying to punch wsnt feeling this

yo u cant be pullin no trigger cause u cant afford a gun/
u have to look around da streets for money just to buy a sticky bun/*lol funny

"M"otherfuka ur ''A''ss is ''W''ack/
u must be stupid to think that i wouldn't post back/
ur too easy....but still i aint gonna cut u no slack/
*This was ok to

yo bitch wats wid u talkin about diks and men..well i guess its ok/
no it aint bitch i think u a just a little gay/
*Little bit , played.....

for battlin me i think ur brain is hollow/
ur the only emcee i hav seen dat dont like to spit..cause u like to swallow/ ( cocksuker)
*This was a little bit ok

merking faggots like u is soo fun/
especially when dey as white as a memba of kkk's cum/
*Wack really .......

**finisher**
yo u wrong cause my name aint danny..so i prooved u wrong/
the only thing u can put ur lips on is a fuken bong/
*feeding's a bitch

ur rhymes were written on paper and now there gonna be torn/
he got a plastic dik cause he didn't have one when he was born/
while he is waiting for me to spit he is busy looking up ga porn//
*To bla bla bla

Put some more creativity in your verses....

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yo, this man called himself ShEpNeY_zAnY//
Sucker I bet you earn money as a nanny//*You thought that rhymed?
hell yeah... this boy is a wigger//
E.i. this boy likes nelly, and thinks he's a nigger//Wack line, weak ass punch
people... he doesn't even know what's a trigger//*No thats hard to know, also a wack line
Neither he knows that his mom's got a dick//
even his dad thinks it's sick, especially cuz'it's big//*Lmao
Yo, I'm almost done, but it feels like I just begon//*Than go on the street , and scream ''Hes coming'' or somthing

zAny likes men, especially when there are many (many men)//
Anyway.... I think he's real name is danny//
not that I know fo'sho', but this boy acts slick//
You know wit sunglasses, AND his hair thick//*Didnt feel this last part at all

Vote=Zany, he had luck that he had a few ok things in his verse.i thought it was a not that good battle and both off you need elevation