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Old 07-07-03, 06:37 AM   #5
RythmicTendicies
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This Was A Dpe Piece Dawg, A Little Controversial Topic, But Anyway:

I Think Your Been Rappin' SomeWhere Else Been Rapping For A While. You Had Good Solid lines, Nice Rhyming:
"tragic that what he made in 7 days, we destroyed overnight/" - That Was a Killa Line!

The Flow Here Was Smooth, Never Fell Of Once. You had Mad Imagry And Wordplay Here:

Overall: Although It Was Not Very Long, 7/10, Keep Improvin, Add Some Multi's Here And There!
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