Thread: Hard and Harsh
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Old 07-07-03, 09:08 AM   #2
RythmicTendicies
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Did Any Of This Happen Or Are You Just Tring To Be "Gangsta"?

As For The joint Itself, Flow Was O.k, Went pretty Smooth For MOst Of It, You have Good Rhyming Capabilities, The Words Seemed To All be IN The Right PLace, You Know?

You Could Do With Expaning The vocab, But You Had Good Imagary, I Really felt This Shit Is Some PLaces! : remember at school i was the hood boy who always got treated as the retard// That Line Was Pretty Tight.

Overall: 7/10, Could Have Been Better, IfThis Really Happened To You Or Somebody You can relate To, Then I'd Give It A 8/10..

Keep Improvin You Wordlpay And Vocab
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