lol.. you tell him bash... and that was wack,,, I'll help you out a bit... instead of just rhyming words randomly that sound cool together try and formulate a plot to it...

MoRbId, you sound like a poor kid << - you could play off this line
I should send your fuckin ass back to abortion<<- But didn't
before I rip you up into tiny little portions
[b]^how could you rip him into portions after he's already been aborted...
and grill you up so your momma could eat you up like horse shit
^his mom eats horse shit?
My rhymes are so raw once I spit them in your mouth it'll taste like medicinemedicine isn't raw, it's lots of chemicals together that form one super chemical;.. ....

if you can't see a problem with those lines you need serious help.. they barely even flowed.. not try'n to put a downer on your day, but work on it... here's what I would've done..

MoRbId, you sound like a poor kid
killin' this baby like a pre-natal abortion
cut up tha fetus in-ta tiny little portions
grill it an' feed-it to ya momma before sex...
My rhymes so raw I spit them I spit-m like medicen....

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