Basically Everything That Mic'd Said But Still Ya Verse Is Too Basic...And Make Sure It Rhymes Aswell...Most Of Ya Lines Didnt Rhyme...That Cant Be Happening When Writing A Text Verse...Look For More Complexity In Ya Verse...Over Time You Will Elevate But Its Good To Know What Ya Gotta Start Lookin For Now...Basically Read The Tutorial Sub-Forum...Has Everything Ya Need And Its All Perfectly Explained...Good Luck...

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