Shiznit's THoughts:

hmm...the sorta kinda letter thing goin on was well written...as far as the emotions...i was feelin it..

this poem made me think of the song "Emotionless" by Good Charlotte...i dun kno if u ever heard of it..but when u hear it ..you would feel exactly those pains inside them...

here's the lyrics of the song...it was nice bu the only difference was..this song was dedicated to his dad and urs are to both parents..

Emotionless
(just wanna share...lol)

Hey dad,
I'm writing to you
not to tell you, that I still hate you
just to ask you
how you feel
and how we fell apart
how this fell apart

are you happy out there in this great wide world?
do you think about your sons?
do you miss your little girl?
when you lay your head down
how do you sleep at night?
do you even wonder if we're all right?

but we're all right
we're all right

it's been a long hard road without you by my side
why weren't you there all the nights that we cried
you broke my mother's heart
you broke your children for life
it's not ok,
but we're all right
I remember the days, you were a hero in my eyes,
but those were just a long lost memory of mine
I spent so many years learning how to survive
Now, I'm writing just to let you know I'm still alive

the days I spent so cold, so hungry
were full of hate
I was so angry
those scars run deep inside this tattooed body
there's things I'll take to my grave
but I'm okay
I'm okay

it's been a long hard road without you by my side
why werent you there all the nights that we cried?
you broke my mother's heart
you broke your children for life
it's not ok,
but we're all right
I remember the days you were a hero in my eyes,
but those were just a long lost memory of mine
Now, I'm writing just to let you know I'm still alive
yeah, I'm still alive


and sometimes
I forgive
and this time
I'll admit that I miss you, I miss you
hey dad

this one has a different meaning tho..but when i read urs it just made me think of this song...hehe

nice one lady....i really feelin this a lot...didnt put much vocab in it tho..but the content was very touching...keep it up!

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