well, this wasn't at all bad other than the fact that the whole "look at me, I'm gankstuh" shit is played.
If it actually happened, then that's your buisness, but it still doesn't make for very good writing anymore.
It might be nice in audio though. My favourite lines were:
Quote:
i dont like to moan bout diffirences but being diffirent is always hard//
i remember at school i was the hood boy who always got treated as the retard//
whos laughin last,well it aint me cuz im still hustlin,thuggin late//
all of us know if were all ghetto all our lives is in the hands of fate//
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those still shone through. The very last one quote was the best in the piece.
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