This was pretty good. I wasn't feeling all the lines though. There was a story behind this but I must have missed it.

The bad parts about this are the ones where you made it sound like things are out of God's control, which they aren't. Or the parts where you said God did know what was going on and didn't know what was going to happen. Everything else was good. Interesting content.

You're a good writer I just didn't really feel everything you had to say. This was good so you should get more responses...hopefully