Honestly, I wasn't so sure about reading all that. Sometimes it sucks to read something long that isn't good. But once I got into it, I liked it.

You told a good story about your life, the friends you have, family, and what you hope to be one day. I liked reading this a lot. I'd give you tips on how to get better but I don't think this should be changed at all. You wrote pretty good here. I'm glad I did take the time to read all of it Keep posting..